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Tuesday, 6 August 2019

The most dangerous writing challenge

once upon a time there was an elephant named Jamie. He lived in a jungle. one day Jamie heard a little kitten crying. he followed the sound and then he saw the little kitten stuck on a rock. Jamie tried to help the little kitten but his trunk was to small to reach. he found a way to help the kitten he jumped into the water and went to save the little kitten.


For this week writing task we did the challenge called the dangerous writing. We had 5 minutes to write a story about a kitten stuck on a rock and a elephant saving it. this is what i did in 5 minutes

2 comments:

  1. Hi Adriana,Its your fellow best friend,Aye.I loved how you named the elephant 'Jamie' what a catchy name.By the way try add some detail and don't forget your capital letters.Love:Aye

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