Once upon a time there was a mouse named Toby. He lived in a hole in someone's house. One day Toby smelt some cheese. Toby was a very smart mouse so he know that the people that lived in the house were trying to trap him. So Toby made a plan his plan was to find a something to made him float like a sting. Toby tried it around him and tried it on the fan that wasn't moving and went down. He got the cheese and then went back to his hole. The End
This is a Dangerous Writing Task. We had 5 minutes to write as much as we can. We had to write about a mouse trying to get cheese with out getting stuck in a mouse trap.
Hey Adriana,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of writing.Excellent for just 5 minutes!
Just a heads up maybe you should try to use more detail I could help you in class.From:Aye-Myat